the trap
my mind is hazy,
the fizz is all around
I am sitting and gazing
like a statue of a clown.
life is so vague, so doubtful ,so unclear
incidents so happen that I just cannot bear.
sometimes I doubt myself, my personality...
people trust me so much but am I really worthy!
so many expectations they tend to bound
and what I end up is going round and round...
my head is aching,body getting tired..
somebody rescue me ,let me out of this trap...
the smoke is rising..
the nauseating smoke..
my mind getting hazier
the fizz is all around
the fizz is all around
I am sitting and gazing
like a statue of a clown.
life is so vague, so doubtful ,so unclear
incidents so happen that I just cannot bear.
sometimes I doubt myself, my personality...
people trust me so much but am I really worthy!
so many expectations they tend to bound
and what I end up is going round and round...
my head is aching,body getting tired..
somebody rescue me ,let me out of this trap...
the smoke is rising..
the nauseating smoke..
my mind getting hazier
the fizz is all around
posted by Neha Jain | 11:06 AM
5 Comments:
so finally one with a different style...as great as ever and u keep falling into the trap ;) ... try out some haikus if u like...probably u'll enjoy writing them
Reminds me of Saarang Main quiz Finals.
The smoke, The Fizz and the level of questions.
life is so vague, so doubtful ,so...
...really worthy!
BTW if you did not like the comment, can you please copy-paste them back in my blog with the reason for rejecting?
and u still seem to be falling into that trap ... getting better and better by the day :)
and u still seem to be falling into the trap ... getting better and better by hte day :)
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